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Universal Bookmark by ~GGdown:iconGGdown:



I'm a universal bookmark and I'm here for you
Marking your place through all that you do
I sit here and wait through all that you feel
Helpless to help and helpless to heal

I'm a universal bookmark, essential to all
Given a role in the big and the small
Don’t know what I’m doing or why I am here
But ready to catch your bright shining tear

I’m a universal bookmark, biding my time
Still as the darkness, quiet as a mime
Your constant companion, keeping your page
Reading the reasons for all of your rage

I watch over your diary, guard hidden truths
My smiling face, comforting line
Makes you trust helps you feel fine
And your blood on my body is simply divine
©2005-2009 ~GGdown
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Author's Comments

I'm sorry, this wasn't sposed to end up....'slicey', but it did. I'll change it if I can think of a better way to do the last stanza (whch by the way is a deliberately different meter) I also had a bit of trouble keeping it constant in the other stanzaz, but I think I got away with it.
Anyway, this is a really old idea that I just found and managed to finish, hope you like and as always, I appreciate constructive criticism.

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ooOOooOOooOOoo Graeme's getting good :P lol luffs it! tres bien monsieur!
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